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작성자 : diz***   ·   2015-11-01

How do you define "SUCCESS"?. For you success means what?

I almost done this homework, but some error occurred. So I am writing it again.

I think the ‘Success’ is a happiness without doubt.
When I was teens, I wanted that everyone loves me. I realized after a long time, it’s impossible. After then I despair with my family background. I wanted to study in another country or grad school, but I couldn’t because of money issue. When I started to work, I couldn’t be satisfied my job. But I didn’t know how I could enter the huge company (I still don’t know that). Anyway I wanted to get credit for capability in my work. So I got a lot of stress and finally I couldn’t control my mind. I quitted my job.
These days, I’ve thought that maybe I didn’t really wanted to be ‘that’ person. If I wanted to be, I didn’t feel that pain. I’m curious about the real person who I want to be. This is a project for me.
I came back to my job 6 months since then, and I try not to overdo work. I try to find the pleasure of daily life. And I try to be satisfied for myself sincerely.
I didn’t succeed. I know what I gave up. I still find the answer.

Thank you!

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How do you define "SUCCESS"?. For you success means what?

I'm almost done with this homework, but some error occurred. So, I am writing it again.

I think the "Success" is a happiness without any doubts. When I was a teen, I wanted that everyone loved me. I realized after a long time, it's impossible. Then, I got despair with my family background. I wanted to study in another country/ abroad or graduate school, but I couldn't because of money issues. When I started to work, I couldn't be satisfied with my job. But, I didn't know how I could enter the huge companies (I still don't know how). Anyway, I wanted to get credits for my capabilities in my work. So, I got a lot of stress and eventually, I couldn't control my mind, I quitted my job.
These days, I've thought that maybe I didn't really want to be "that" person. Because if I really wanted to be like that, I wouldn't feel that pain. I'm curious about the real person who I want to be. This is a project for me. I came back to my job 6 months ago and since then, I try not to overwork. I try to find the pleasure in my daily life. In addition to that, I try to be sincerely satisfied to myself.
I didn't succeed before. I know what I gave up. I'm still looking for the answer.

Thank you!


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