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Edward's Homework
작성자 : wjd*** · 2015-10-30
There is a country where has a bay.
And infront of the bay is mountains.
And the mountains have mountain ranges.
And the mountain ranges have mountain chains.
What is this country?
[maybe this country is well-known{This country is a subregion(or a region)}]
{the answer(?) is korea}
And infront of the bay is mountains.
And the mountains have mountain ranges.
And the mountain ranges have mountain chains.
What is this country?
[maybe this country is well-known{This country is a subregion(or a region)}]
{the answer(?) is korea}
답변
There is a country where has a bay.
And in front of the bay, there are mountains.
And the mountains have mountain ranges.
And the mountain ranges have mountain chains.
What is this country?
[Maybe this is a well-known country {This country is a subregion (or a region)}]
The answer is Korea.
POINTS TO IMPROVE
1. Spacing
2. Punctuation Mark
3. Word Choices
THANK YOU FOR DOING YOUR HOMEWORK EDWARD!
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