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작성자 : diz***   ·   2015-10-29

It has been said that life is a game- but how can we play it if we don't know where the goalposts are?

This sentence gives me deep insight. Sometimes I see some people who really want to win other persons. And when I was young I wanted to win, too. But I going to ask them what does the 'win' mean?
We can feel happy when we think that we win but that time is not eternal. We need to face many challenges and maybe we win, maybe we lose. We should accept the results.

If our life is a game, where is the goalpost? And who is the judge? I think the goalpost is located in our satisfaction and we are the judge of our lifes.

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It has been said that life is a game. But, how can we play it if we don't know where the goalposts are?

This sentence gives a deep insight. Sometimes, I see some people who really want to win others. I used to be like that when I was young I wanted to win, too. I going to ask them What does really the word 'win' mean?
We feel happy when we think that we win but that  is not eternal. We need to face many challenges. and maybe We may win, maybe we may lose. Whatever happens, we should accept the results.

If our life is a game, where is the goalpost? who is the judge? I think goalpost is based on our satisfaction. We are the judge of our lives.


 

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