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5 sentences useing hole grammars(subject, verb, pronoun, noun,adjective,adverb, preposition)

작성자 : krw***   ·   2015-10-29

1.Tom start to runs fast.he loves to eat pizza. Tom start to run with their happy cat, and then he fell down suddenly on play ground sand. So he cried.
2.Today, is my birthday, So I played with my friends. and my friend andy said,"look at this pretty dog!" So I played with the dog. We ate potato stick. and suddenly,My friend broken her leg, and she go to home.we sit on the sand and cried.
3.Sasha late on the shcool.so she runs to the school. unluckliy,today has a test. a sad bird cawed.she grab the pencil,then, oops! there was no pencil! she suddenly,saw pencil was under a teacher's desk!she cannot borrow or move, so she cannot do test.
4.Jenny was naghty girl.she don't like school.she want to do don't listen class. she grab notebook and make airplane and blewed. oops. airplane was in trashcan!suddenly she stoped.uglly teacher came to trashcan and glared at jenny.
5.I was doing a tag,my friend ruby was it.she start to run.my little sister was eating icecream. I want to eat it .then, I was it! I was eating icecream and runed.then I see the cute bird. I suddenly stoped.then I splied icecream on sand.my siater cried.

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CORRECTION/S:


1. Tom runs fast. He loves to eat pizza. Tom started  to run with their happy cat. He fell down suddenly on the playground sand. so, he cried.
2. Today, is my birthday, I played with my friends. My friend Andy said, "look at this pretty dog!" so I played with the dog. We ate potato stick and when suddenly my friend broken her leg, and  so she has to go to home. We sat on the sand and cried.
3. Sasha was running late on the for school, so she runs ran as fast as she could to the school. Unluckliy, today she had a test. She grab the was looking for a pencil, but there was none. She suddenly All of a sudden, she saw a pencil was under the teacher's desk! She cannot borrow from anyone or move, stand from the chair, so she cannot do was not able to take the test.
4. Jenny was a naughty girl. She doesn't like school. She wants to do doesn't listen in class. She grab plays with her notebook and just makes paper airplanes and blewed. The airplane was shot in the trash can while playing, she suddenly stopped. The ugly teacher went to the trash can and glared at Jenny.
5. I was doing a tag when my friend Ruby came was it. She started to run. My little sister was eating ice cream. I was also craving for it want to eat it.  Then, I was it!  I grabbed it from her. I ran and ate the ice cream. Then, I saw a cute bird. I suddenly stopped. I spilled the ice cream on the sand, my sister cried.


 

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