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작성자 : may***   ·   2015-10-28

I don't want to see other people's records.
Because first, it is other people's privacy.
In the records there are things what people did someone called and numbers of how many did someone called to each person.
And there are names about telephone numbers (like mom, friend 1, friend 2...)
So if someone saw that, the someone will know everything and you might get into trouble.
Second, if the owner saw you looking the phone, the owner will be mad.
As I said, the record is someone's privacy, so the someone don't want other people to look at it. And their relationship will be broken.
Finally, it can broke people's relationship.
If the person who saw the record find something suspicious the person will might can't trust the owner. And they get farder and farder and fianlly, there relationship will disapper.

So these are the reason why I don't want to see other people's records.

답변

I don't want to see other people's records.
Because first, it is other people's privacy.
In the records, there are things that people do someone such as messages, phone calls , and contact  numbers. of how many did someone called to each person.
And there are names about telephone numbers (like mom, friend 1, friend 2...)
So, if someone sees that, the someone then the person will know everything and you might get into trouble.
Second, if the owner sees you looking at his phone, the owner will be mad.
As I said, the record is someone's privacy, so the someone the person doesn't want other people to look at it. And their relationship will be broken.
Finally, it can broke break people's relationship.
If the person who sees the record finds something suspicious, the owner won't  trust the person.
 And Their get farder and farder and finally relationship will disapper disappear  fade away.
So these are the reasons why I don't want to see other people's records.

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CONCEPTS TO STUDY:
WORD USAGE
the someone  vs. the person

SPELLING
disapper  vs. disappear  

Multiple usage of the modal verbs:
the person will might can't trust the owner.
>>  The owner won't  trust the person.

VOCABULARY:
fade away : to gradually become less strong or clear and then disappear
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