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작성자 : pol*** · 2015-10-27
<doing list on the weekend>
1, I go shopping with my family at the mall.
2, I do my homework .
3, I play with my friends.
4, I read some books.
5, I watch TV.
6, I play the piano.
1, I go shopping with my family at the mall.
2, I do my homework .
3, I play with my friends.
4, I read some books.
5, I watch TV.
6, I play the piano.
답변
CORRECTION/S:
1. I go shopping with my family at the mall.
2. I do my homework.
3. I play with my friends.
4. I read some books.
5. I watch TV.
6. I play the piano.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Punctuation marks
* Sentence construction
* Prepositions