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작성자 : seo***   ·   2015-10-27

Your question was, Are kids busier than adults? My answer is, both are busy because of each other. Kids are busy asking their parents for everything, and adults are busy making excuses about them. Well, I never blame adults because I'm on their side. I usually make excuses to my brother who always wants to tell me something. But I made excuses so many times even if I am free , now I feel sorry about it. So my conclusion is, kids have to try by themselves first, and adults try to be kinder to their children even if they are sleepy.

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Your question was, Are kids busier than adults? My answer is, both are busy. because of each other. Kids are busy asking their parents for everything, and adults are busy making excuses about them. Well, I never blame adults because I'm on their side. I usually make excuses to my brother who always wants to tell me something. But I have made excuses so many times even if I am was free. Now I feel sorry about it. So my conclusion is, Kids have to try by hard themselves on their own first, and adults should always try to be kinder kind and patient to their children even if they are sleepy.

Take note of the corrections made in your composition, Sarah. Your writing skills are improving. You just need to be more creative in constructing sentences. See you on Thursday! :)

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