My main idea is that this cheetahs team had a wonderful teamwork. Because all of them did there best in the game. Unlike me, I didn't do my best because first, the ball was very scary. It was very fast and seemed very hard. Second, I know I'm not good at soccer. What if I make a mistake? The other boys in my team played very hard. I didn't want to be the one who would mess it. But next time, at least I will not chat with my friend.

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