CORRECTION/S:

I have to contact to my mom.
When I don't contact to my friend, my friend will be angry.

I will separate the candies.
I have to separate my toy with my sister.

I want to have my room.
My room is so warm and comfortable.

Knocking is very polite manner.
I have to knock before I come in to a room.

Probably, I will be win.
Probably, the phone will be blow out.

Things to improve on:
>word choices
>spelling
>punctuation marks

Thank you so much for doing your homework, Ann!
Very Good!