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The Importance Of Independence Day
작성자 : cho*** · 2015-10-23
In Korea, Independence Day is a day for selebrating liberation from Japan.
We celebrate this day by hanging the national flag of Korea in front of our house.
The reasons why this day is important are
1.we have to thank for the fighters for independence.
2.many people died and hurted during repression of Japan.
3.it is also a day that is telling to love our country.
We celebrate this day by hanging the national flag of Korea in front of our house.
The reasons why this day is important are
1.we have to thank for the fighters for independence.
2.many people died and hurted during repression of Japan.
3.it is also a day that is telling to love our country.
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CORRECTION/ S:
In Korea, Independence Day is a the day for celebrating liberation from Japan.
We celebrate this day by hanging the national flag of Korea in front of our house.
The reasons why this day is important are:
1. We have to thank for the fighters for independence.
2. Many people died and hurted during repression of Japan.
3. It is also a day that is telling told to love our country.
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