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작성자 : oof***   ·   2015-10-24

yesterday I spent time with my scik cat moon
when school or work is over I usually ate snake or do homework
later on I plan to take a dinner
so for in this book I have learned about lie is can be good but it can be bed too

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CORRECTION/S:

Yesterday, I spent time with my scik sick cat, Moon.
When I'm at school or when work is over done, I usually ate eat snake snacks or do my homework. Later, I plan to take a have dinner.
What I have learned so far in from this book about is lying can sometimes be good or bad but it can be bed too.  


 

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