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Taking a test
작성자 : hj0*** · 2015-10-22
1. I will turn around and point my broken pencil.
And if she cannot make heads or tails, I will pretend to brake my pencil.
Then she will make sense of that.
And she will borrow me her pencil.
2. I will put up my hand and excuse myself to go where the pencil sharpner is.
And if she cannot make heads or tails, I will pretend to brake my pencil.
Then she will make sense of that.
And she will borrow me her pencil.
2. I will put up my hand and excuse myself to go where the pencil sharpner is.
답변
1. I will turn around and point my broken pencil.
And if she cannot make heads or tails, I will pretend to break my pencil.
Then she will make sense of that.
And she will let me borrow her pencil.
2. I will raise my hand and excuse myself to go where the pencil sharpener is.
POINTS TO IMPROVE:
1. Word Choices
2. Spelling
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