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October21, 2015
Dear Sengmin,
Happy birthday!I grageration you have a 11's virsday.
I hope you had a blast on your 11th birthday. Did you have receive my present?congratution virsday! Happy birthday!
Your friend,
Adriano
NOTE:
* "Congratulations on your birthday" sounds rather as if you are surprised that the person lived so long. You might just want to say "Happy birthday".
* Choose appropriate words.
* Observe sentence spaciing.
* Use capitalization rules.
* Be careful not to mispell a word.
Thank you for doing your homework. ![]()
Happy hump day!