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작성자 : 197***   ·   2015-10-21

Octover21, 2015
Dear sengmin

happy birsday!
I hope you had a blast on your 11th birthday. Did you have receive my present? Happy birthday!
You have my present?
congratution virsday!

your friend,
adriano

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CORRECTION/S:


October21, 2015


Dear Sengmin,


Happy birthday!
I grageration you have a 11's virsday.
I hope you had a blast on your 11th birthday. Did you have receive my present?
congratution virsday! Happy birthday!


Your friend,

Adriano

NOTE:

* "Congratulations on your birthday" sounds rather as if you are surprised that the person lived so long. You might just want to say "Happy birthday".

* Choose appropriate words.

* Observe sentence spaciing.

* Use capitalization rules.

* Be careful not to mispell a word.

Thank  you for doing your homework.

Happy hump day!


 

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