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작성자 : a96*** · 2015-10-21
IF THERE IS NO ANIMALS
THERE will be so many insects because there is no animals that eats insects.
So the crops will be eaten so there will be almost no plants .Also we can eat meats cause there is no animals that give us meat like cows pigs and other animals that give us meat. So there is no food so the people will be almost dead
So they will need to eat almost only the insects. So the people will go back to
the past.
THERE will be so many insects because there is no animals that eats insects.
So the crops will be eaten so there will be almost no plants .Also we can eat meats cause there is no animals that give us meat like cows pigs and other animals that give us meat. So there is no food so the people will be almost dead
So they will need to eat almost only the insects. So the people will go back to
the past.
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CORRECTION/S:
IF THERE IS ARE NO ANIMALS
There will be so many insects. Without them, there will be unbalanced nature because there won't be animals who will that eat insects.
The crops will be eaten so there will be almost no plants. Also, we can eat meats there is no meat from cows, pigs, and other animals that give us meat won't be available. There will be food shortages, so people will be almost dead.
They will need to eat almost only the any available insects. So, the people would just want to go back to the past.
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