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작성자 : epr*** · 2015-10-19
I was playing with friends in bus. I went to good place, and I went to make a cup. I made a cupand I ate foods. And we went playground and play.
And I went to home.
And I went to home.
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I played with my friends in the bus. I went to a good place, made a cup,ate foods and we played in the playground. After that, I went back home.
Points to Improve on:
-Choice of words
- Sentence Construction
- Conjunction Usage
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