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How to be healthy
작성자 : hrd*** · 2015-10-18
How to be healthy
1. We must exercise every day.
2. We must not eat lots of sweet foods.
3.We must eat foods regularly.
4.We must do some sports.
1. We must exercise every day.
2. We must not eat lots of sweet foods.
3.We must eat foods regularly.
4.We must do some sports.
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How to be healthy
1. We must exercise every day.
2. We must not eat lots of too much sweets foods.
3. We must eat foods regularly.
4. We must do some sports.
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