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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-10-15

When mom gets angry, it is a very serious emergency, we can’t extinguish the fire like the real fire which is formed by oxygen, heat and fuel. THERE IS CERTAINLY NO WAY!!! Usually, we don’t get involved into any emergency so angry-mom is the closes and realistic example of emergencies. Once you got caught, you are not able to escape by struggling hard. The time and fact (if it is misunderstanding but mostly it’s not) are the only keys to solve the problem. Everyone knows how serious it is, if they experienced one before. Yet I don’t know how to prevent it, it is such a random accident and thus, has high-possibility of occurring. Just pray for not involving into it, and behave as much as you can!

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When mom gets angry, it is a very serious emergency problem. We can't extinguish the fire like the real fire which is formed by oxygen, heat, and fuel. THERE IS CERTAINLY NO WAY!!! Usually, we don't want ourselves to be involved into any serious problems. An angry mom is the closest and realistic example of getting into trouble. Once you have been got caught, you are not able to escape by struggling hard. The time and fact (if it is a misunderstanding but most of the time it's not) are the only keys to solve the problem. Everyone knows how serious it is, if they have experienced one before. Yet, I don't know how to prevent it, it is such a random accident and thus, has high-possibility of occurring. Just pray for not involving into it and behave as much as you can!

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