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작성자 : mad***   ·   2015-10-15

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My quiz question is 'Is it wise and beneficial to have a friends who have different personailities from me?'.
And my answer is yes. The reason is because, if he or she is good at something that I'm bad at, we can learn and earn something from him or her. So, it may improve our disadvantages to good ways! Here's an example. Let's pretend that 'A' has very bad temper, but 'A''s friend 'B' has good and positive mind and temper. If 'A' stay long time with 'B' I suppose that 'A' might get good temper just like 'B'. So, we can say that it is wise and beneficial to have a friends who have different personailities.

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[Quiz Question related to the topic and gather details.]

My quiz question is "Is it wise and beneficial to have a friends who have different personalities from me?" and my answer is yes. The reason is because, if he or she is good at something that I'm not good at, we can learn from each other. So, it may improve our weaknesses to be better! Here's an example. Let's pretend that "A" has a very bad temper, but "A''s friend, "B" has good and positive mind and patient. If "A"stay for a long time with "B" I suppose that "A" might get a good control of temper just like "B". So, we can say that it is wise and beneficial to have a friends who have different personalities.

Thank you for doing your homework, Alex. Please take time to check my corretions above. In addition to that, be mindful of the following:

* SPELLING: (x)personailities ~> personalities
* CHOICE OF WORDS
* CONJUNCTIONS
* PREPOSTIONS
* ARTICLES

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