회원가입 로그인

학습방

원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!

영작문첨삭

The best excercise for me

작성자 : cel***   ·   2015-10-14

I think the exercises are necessary for everyone, both healthy people and unhealthy people. I also need to exercise regularily in daily life.
I used to run on the treadmill in the gym and I liked running. However some time ago I felt knee pain when I run, so I was difficulty in running. After that I couldn't feel pleasant through running. Now, I walk fast and powerfully on the treadmill in the gym or near my house. When I walk, it takes for about 1 hour.
Walking fast and powerfully is gives my body energy and vitality. Besides walking fast trains my bone and muscle. I always feel well after walking fast.
I will exercise walking fast as possible as I can.

답변

I think exercising is necessary for everyone, both healthy people and unhealthy people. I also need to exercise regularly in daily life.
I used to run on the treadmill in the gym and I liked running. However some time ago I felt a knee pain while I was running, so I had a difficulty running. After that I couldn't enjoy running anymore. Now, I walk fast and powerfully on the treadmill in the gym or near my house. When I walk, it takes for about 1 hour.
Walking fast and powerfully is gives my body energy and vitality. Besides, walking fast trains my bones and muscles. I always feel well after walking fast. I will exercise walking fast as much as I can.
목록으로