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작성자 : seo***   ·   2015-10-13

I think most girls are talkative. Because there are many girls who like to talk with their friends but I didn't see a girl who deosn't want to talk. And boy?
Well, I believed that boys don't talk much, but now I know. Boy talk a lot, too.
And one of them is my brother. He is a scamp and he always talks, talks, talks.
Sometime I can't stand him, I asks him to be quite, we usually fight. Ha ha, never think that all boys are quite. It's a lie.

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I think most girls are talkative. Because there are many girls who because they like to talk with their friends. but I didn't haven't see seen a girl who deosn't doesn't want to talk. And boy boys?
Well, I believed believe that boys don't talk much, but now I know. Boy talk a lot, realize they do, too.
And One of them is my brother. He is a scamp and he always talks, talks, talks.
Sometimes I can't stand him, I asks ask him to be quite quiet. We usually fight. Ha-ha. I have never think thought that all boys are quite quiet. It's a lie.

Sarah, always remember this when writing a composition:
I think most girls are talkative. Because there are... (X)
I think most girls are talkative because there are... (Correct)

Be careful with spelling.
quiet, doesn't

Thank you for submitting your homework Sarah! Now I wonder if you talk a lot with your friends and what you like to talk about with them.:) See you on Thursday!

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