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chance to sell
작성자 : sey*** · 2015-10-12
You give me homework -Wed.-
Tadda~!! : If you had a chance to sell some Korean products to other countries, what would these be and why? Write an essay about it.
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1. paper
- Our Korean paper's quality are good. I don't know quality of other country, but I bet our paper are good.
2. text book - to students -
- Our Korean text book's quality also good. It has many colors,and many stickers, also white great quality paper. I think another country's text book is also good, but I bet our text book's quality are good...
3.3D printer
- Ofcourse, I think U.S's 3D printer are good more than our country,but our country's 3D printer are also good,I think. It is cheap (about 2000$)
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CORRECTION/S:
1. paper
- Our Korean paper has excellent quality are good. I don't know quality of have any idea about other countries, but I bet ours paper are of good quality.
2. text book - to students -
- Our Korean textbooks are also high-quality also good. It has There are many color variations,and many different stickers, also and are made from high quality white paper. I think other countries textbooks is are also good, but I bet we have better textbook's quality.
3.3D printer
- Of course, I think US 3D printers are good more better than ours, but our country's 3D printer are is also good, in my opinion. It is also cheap (about $2,000).
NOTE:
*Spacing between words.
*The $ is usally placed before the number to discourage forging.
*Add comma to numbers every three digits.
*Use of period [.] at the end of a sentence.
Thank you for doing your homework. 