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작성자 : a96*** · 2015-10-09
How to protect animals 3ways
1.Don't throw trash on the road (or anything else except the trashcan)
2.Don't threw rocks or anything hard to the animals
3.If you see an cat or any animals in the road, call the animal hospital (or you could call parents to say to the animal hospital)
1.Don't throw trash on the road (or anything else except the trashcan)
2.Don't threw rocks or anything hard to the animals
3.If you see an cat or any animals in the road, call the animal hospital (or you could call parents to say to the animal hospital)
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CORRECTION: 3 ways on how to protect the animals
1.Don't throw the trash on the road. (or anything else except the trashcan)
2.Don't throw rocks or anything hard to the animals.
3.If you see any injured cat or animals on the road, call the animal hospital (or you could tell your parents for them to call the animal hospital)
> Happy Friday, Edwin! Thank you for doing your homework! You did great! However, make sure to take note of the corrections as well.
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Teacher Joyce