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l did this~!!! on the weekends!!!(hw)

작성자 : skk***   ·   2015-10-09

Aham~!! I was so sleepy!
I went to the kitchen and eat the breakfast.
Then, I went to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth.
Next, my family went to Olympic Park.In the Olympic Park, we rode bicycles and do many activities
Also, we went to our home and I brushed my teeth, took a shower, wash my face, wash my hands, and wore my contect- dream lends.
Finally, I went to bed and slept.
ZZZ~!!!

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CORRECTION/S:

Aham~!! I was so sleepy!

I went to the kitchen and ate my breakfast.

Then, I went to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth.

Next, my family went to Olympic Park. At the Olympic Park, we rode bicycles and did many activities.

Also, we went back home and I brushed my teeth, took a shower, washed my face, washed my hands, and wore my nightwear.

Lastly, I went to sleep.

ZZZ~!!!

Thank you for doing your homework, Cindy!

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