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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-10-08

A lot of people want to have a pet. But there are some animals which can’t be kept by human. First, there are endangered species of animals. There are people who get them through smuggling or getting extras (when the zoo gets more animals then they really need they often sell them away without proper progress and confirmations.) from zoo after paying them. Raising them personally is counted as serious illegal problem. Second, the wild animals which are big and furious can’t be handled unless they were living with people since they were babies. (Monkeys we see in zoo are domesticated. They were handled since they were babies. Monkeys are actually very wild.)
Not just reasons we can’t raise some animals, we need to think about if we can be responsible on its life-if we can feed them, and provide them a proper environment-before we buy them.

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A lot of people want to have a pet. But there are some animals which can't be kept by humans. First, there are endangered species/animals. There are people who get them through smuggling or getting extras from the zoo (when the zoo gets more animals than they really need, they often sell them without the proper process and authorization). Raising them personally is counted as a serious illegal crime. Second, the wild animals which are big and furious can't be handled unless they were living with the people since they were babies. (monkeys we see in the zoo are domesticated. They were tame and kept since they were babies. Monkeys are actually very wild.)  Not just those reasons like we can't raise some animals, but we need to think about it if we can be responsible of their lives - if we can feed them, and provide them a proper environment before we buy them.
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