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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-10-06

Students, parents and school mostly argue about the grade and education. There’s nothing important among them, but maybe not with some people. In school, there are some bad-behaving and not hard-working teachers. Then, parents and students will claim about punishing or rather firing them. Not only teachers, students are also bad attitude and ‘naughty’, therefore teachers would be willing to meet his or her parents and tell what they did in school. For problem between parents and students are always about grade and studying. They fight about how and why they got low grade, that’s all. It happens every time when the kids receive report about their attitude and accomplishment/final grade. Like these, there are always limited problems between school, parents and students.

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Students, parents, and schools mostly argue abou grades and education. There's nothing important among them, but maybe not with some all people. In school, there are some bad-behaving and not hard-working teachers. Then, parents and students will claim about punishing or rather firing them. Not only teachers but also students are also have bad attitude behavior traits and 'naughty',. Therefore, teachers would be are willing to meet his or her student's parents and tell what they do at school. For The problems between parents and students are always about grades and way of studying. They just fight about how and why they got low grades, that's all. It happens every time when the students receive reports about their attitude, accomplishment, and final grades. There are always limited problems between school, parents, and students.

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