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chuseok homework!!!

작성자 : oof***   ·   2015-10-04

today is chuseok l get up in this morning l put on my dress first and l get in the kitchen and l do my best to help my mom and after l finish making the food and l tack a picture of I made and my cousincame to my house and l cant not believe my eyes because he put on the pink short l cant not believe my eyes because he never wear pink and he do the game all day l think he is into that game after we finish dinner he get in the car and go to the home it was tired day

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Today is Chuseok. When l get got up in this morning, l put on my dress first. Then, l get in went to the kitchen and l do my best to helped my mom. and After l've finished making the food, and l tack took a picture of I made myself. and My cousin came to my house and l can't not believe my eyes because he's put on the wearing pink shorts. l can't not believe my eyes what I saw because he never wears pink and he played the game all day. l think he was into still playing that game after we've finished dinner. He got in the car and go to the went home. It is a tiring day.




NOTE:



Be careful choosing a tense for your sentence.

Capitalize the first word in a sentence.

Holidays should be capitalized

Some nouns are always plural in form.
[pants, trousers, shorts, etc.]

Can't is the contraction of cannot.

Use a period [.] at the end of a sentence.



 



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