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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-10-01

There are 3-rs in our lives that we can save environment. First, reduce; using less sources more efficiently for example plastic, paper, aluminum, etc. Second, reusing; using plastic bags again, last, recycle; separating things by their kinds and changing old into new. You can buy bigger bottle of milk then several smaller bottles for example then, it costs less paper or plastic or glass. After drinking all up, you can use glass bottle for plants’ pot or bottles for sauce. If you want to through it away, you need to separate it so recycling progress is easier. Like this 3-r steps, you can use sources efficiently and save environment too!

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There are 3 R's in our lives that we can do to save the environment. First, reduce; using less resources more efficiently for example plastic, paper, aluminum, etc. Second, reuse; using plastic bags again and last, recycle; separating things by their kinds and changing old into new. You can buy bigger bottles of milk instead of several smaller bottles for example. Then, it will cost less paper, plastic or glass. After drinking all up, you can use the glass bottles for plant pots or bottles for sauce. If you want to throw it away, you need to separate it so recycling process is easier. By this 3R steps, you can use resources efficiently and save the environment too!

Hi, Min. I'm glad that you always exert effort when sharing your ideas. Two thumbs up!
Anyway, please check my corrections above.

 

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