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My recent Chuseok experience was fun. I travelled a lot and went to some historical places in my country. I visited Bukchon Hanok, a beautiful village in Seoul where visitors can learn about the customs of Juseon Dynasty. Along these famous Korean landmarks came Gyeongbokgung Palace which is known for its beauty and panoramic view. It's such a great experience to tour around the city but it's exhausting especially that the said location is mountainous. But then again, it's fun.

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