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작성자 : sey***   ·   2015-09-30

Hello teacher jains!!! Good afternoon!!!!!!!!!!^^
I have some homework...

-Name some exported goods/things that play an important role in your daily life. Write something about their importance.

I can't understand what it means,,,But I will just write with -guess-
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interpret a meaning
- important goods in my daily life (only exported goods) ...and write something about their importance.
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Is it right??? OMG,,,,OTL

Anyway... Let's do this!! (Please understand my homework if it is weird...-.-)

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1. car

Why ? - We almost use cars to move. If we don't have cars , maybe there are many problems accur. Ofcouse the air will good , but it will be hard to move.

2.computer

Why ? - We can work with computer , and have some games, or have communication without meeting . There are many thing can do with coumputer,

3.Ship (? is it right??)

Why ? - If we doesn't have ship, there will be has many problems.
Because ... We can use airplane without ship, but it is too expensive to use airplane. And we can't carry many goods.


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That is all ....ㅜ.ㅜ
Please corret my sentences. Maybe there are many wrong in my sentences like,,, grammer word like that....
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Have a nice day!!!<3
^^

By claire (seyoung)

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Hi, Claire!


Here are the corrections:      

     1. car

Why ? - We almost use cars to move. If we don't have cars , maybe there are  will be many problems accur  to occur.  Ofcouse Of course, the air will be good , but it will be hard to move.

2.computer

Why ? - We can work with a computer , and have some games, or have communication without meeting . There are many things that we can do with a coumputer  computer.

3.Ship (? is it right??) - Yes, it is! 

 Why ? - If we doesn't  don't have a ship, there will be has many problems.
Because ... We can use ride an airplane without a ship, but it is too expensive to use   ride an airplane. And also, we can't carry many goods.

These are correct, Claire!

 

Be mindful of the following:

1. Spelling of words
2. Use of articles


 

Thank you for doing your homework!


 


 

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