Hi, David! Welcome back after a very long weekend! I am happy that you have enjoyed it. We will be talking about that in our class later. I'm excited with your stories!
*********CORRECTED ESSAY OF DAVID WON***********
I went to my grandmother's house with my family.
We ate Chuseok food. It was very delicious. Then, I rode my waveboard. It was fun. We also went to a stock farm. We saw cows, ostriches and sheep.
Good job! Thank you for sharing something about your long weekend, David. ![]()
Please be mindful of the following:
* PREPOSITIONS like TO.
* We add apostrophe before or after s to show possession, as in Helen's house or babies' hands.
* SPELLING (X) ortriches ~> ostriches
* PLURAL FORM sheep ~> sheep (it is still the same)