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Long weekend

작성자 : hee***   ·   2015-09-29

I went my grandmother house with my family.
We ate Chuseok food.It is very delicious and I rode my waveboard.
It is fun.And we went a stock farm.We saw cows,ortriches and sheeps.

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Hi, David! Welcome back after a very long weekend! I am happy that you have enjoyed it. We will be talking about that in our class later. I'm excited with your stories!


    *********CORRECTED ESSAY OF DAVID WON***********

I went to my grandmother's house with my family.
We ate Chuseok food. It was very delicious. Then, I rode my waveboard. It was fun. We also went to a stock farm. We saw cows, ostriches and sheep.

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Good job! Thank you for sharing something about your long weekend, David.


Please be mindful of the following:
* PREPOSITIONS like TO.
* We add apostrophe before or after s to show possession, as in Helen's house or babies' hands.
* SPELLING (X) ortriches ~> ostriches
* PLURAL FORM sheep ~> sheep (it is still the same)

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