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작성자 : ryu*** · 2015-09-25
In summer, an air conditioner is a must-have item
But we can negatively affected by using an air conditioner.
We can sick from overexposure to air conditioning when we use an air conditioner for a long time. Also, it is so expensive that we could lose our money:(
Although an air conditioner gives me some bad affects, I can't give up using it!!
I love cool air from the air conditioner>_<
But we can negatively affected by using an air conditioner.
We can sick from overexposure to air conditioning when we use an air conditioner for a long time. Also, it is so expensive that we could lose our money:(
Although an air conditioner gives me some bad affects, I can't give up using it!!
I love cool air from the air conditioner>_<
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CORRECTION/S:
In summer, an air conditioner is a must-have item.But we can be negatively affected by using an air conditioner. We can be sick from overexposure to air conditioning air conditioner when we use an air conditioner it for a long time. And also, it is so expensive that we could lose our money. :( Although an air conditioner gives me some bad affects, I can't give up using it!! I love cool air from the air conditioner. >_<
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