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작성자 : mad***   ·   2015-09-24

[Topic : Is it OK to have their own style?]

I think that it is okay to have people's own style.
Firstly, people are all unique and there are no people that are exactly same. It means that, if others are different with me we should and try to understand or respect them. Because, there would be own unique style to each people.
Secondly, I think it is strange that not reveal and try to hide their own style. Because, we will live just once not twice or more than twice. So, we should do what we want to do but do not care others sight to me.
That's why I think that it is okay to have their own style.

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[Topic : Is it OK to have their own style?]

I think it is okay that people have their own style.
Firstly, people are all unique and there are no people that are exactly the same. It means that, if others are different with us, we should and try to understand or respect them. Because, each person would have their own unique style.
Secondly, I think it is strange if they don't reveal or try to hide their own style. Because, we will just live once not twice or thrice. So, we should do what we want to do and do not care about how others see us. That's why I think that it is okay to have their own style.

Hello, Alex. Thank you for sharing your opinion about this. Yes, we only live once. So, we should make the most out of each day. Anyway, please be mindful of the following:

* WORD ORDER
* SINGULAR VS PLURAL FORM
* CHOICE OF WORDS
* CONJUNCTIONS

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