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Write something about yourself. Use correct punctuation and capitalization. Make at least six (6) sentences.
작성자 : 197*** · 2015-09-23
I am Adiano.
I like read book.
I lern a komdo.
My pet is dog.
I like draw a muchines.
And I like my family!
I like read book.
I lern a komdo.
My pet is dog.
I like draw a muchines.
And I like my family!
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CORRECTION/S:
I learned about Komodos.
My pet is a dog. I like to draw machines.
And I like my family!
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