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작성자 : epr*** · 2015-09-23
Christmas is my favorite holiday, because when I do good things, Santa gives me present.
I want every day is Christmas and I can play with my family.
My family will happy.
I want every day is Christmas and I can play with my family.
My family will happy.
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Christmas is my favorite holiday because when I do good things, Santa gives me a present. I want Christmas everyday because I can play with my family and my family is happy.
