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작성자 : cho*** · 2015-09-21
1-Make sentences.
-people need basic needs.
-Birds migrate to stay alive.
2-do you think animals are still safe in todays generation?
no.because some animals are dying in the zoo because of the hot and cold weather.
-people need basic needs.
-Birds migrate to stay alive.
2-do you think animals are still safe in todays generation?
no.because some animals are dying in the zoo because of the hot and cold weather.
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CORRECTION/S:
1.
- People have basic needs.- Birds migrate to stay alive.
2. No, because some animals are dying in the zoo because of the hot and cold weather.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Choice of words
* Capitalization