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good friend.
작성자 : hee*** · 2015-09-20
To be a good friend,we shold help friends when friends need helps.
And we shold llisten to my friend's story.Then we can be a good friend each other.
And we shold llisten to my friend's story.Then we can be a good friend each other.
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To be a good friend, we should help friends when friends need helps.And We should listen to my friend's each other's stories so we can be a good friends each other.
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