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Homework(Compare a man from a woman and a girl from a boy.)
작성자 : man*** · 2015-09-19
First,I compare the man and boy.(The boy is young)
Man is stronger than boy.But boy is active than man.
Next is new subject.I find the a concomitant feature from woman and girl.
Woman and girl favorite the shopping.
I know this one. Because I am man.Good bye.
Man is stronger than boy.But boy is active than man.
Next is new subject.I find the a concomitant feature from woman and girl.
Woman and girl favorite the shopping.
I know this one. Because I am man.Good bye.
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CORRECTION/S:
The man is stronger than the boy but the boy is more active than the man.
Next is a new subject. I find the concomitant feature on women and girls.
Women and girls' favorite thing to do is shopping.
I know this one because I am a man. Goodbye.
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