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somewhere I want to go - teacher jains's homework.

작성자 : sey***   ·   2015-09-18

Hello ~ teacher jains!! Good afternoon! yeah~! It's friday.. anyway..
You give me some homework. It's easy!

homework
-What famous place would you like to visit and why? Write a short essay about it.

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I want to visit cebu, Philippines.

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Why?

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1. There are many dry mangos..I love that!
2. There are many fruits too!
3. Filipino and Filipina are kindness. I know this. Because when I young, I visited Philippines.
4. Pizza in Philippines are delicious !!!hahahahaha
5. I can learn english.
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by claire (seyoung)

bye~!^^

H..a..p....p...y...F.R.I.D.A.Y

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CORRECTION/S:

 


1. There are many dried mangoes..I love that!
2. There are many fruits too!
3. Filipinos and Filipina are kindness. I know this because when I was young, I visited the Philippines.
4. Pizzas in the Philippines are delicious!!! hahahahaha
5. I can learn English.


 

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