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작성자 : jie***   ·   2015-09-17

To. sister
I'm sorry I didn't tell the truth right then. I couldn't because I was scared that you will be mad at me. But now I think I should tell you the truth. The truth is, remember the day that you asked me 'Did you ruin my dress?' then I told you 'No' but that was a lie. I found the dress and thought it was pretty, so I tried it on. I'm sorry for that too. And the accident happened. I truly sorry about ruinning your dress and lying to you. And I hope you will forgive me. Can you forgive me?

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CORRECTION/S:

To my sister

I'm sorry I didn't tell the truth right then away. I couldn't didn't tell you because I was scared that you will be get mad at me. But now, I should I think it's time for me to tell you the truth. The truth is, remember the day that you asked me "Did you ruin my dress?" then I told you "No" but that was just a lie. I found the dress and thought it was pretty, so I tried it on. I'm sorry for that too. And Then the accident happened. I am truly sorry about ruining your dress and lying to you. And I hope you will forgive me. Can Will you forgive me?

Note : Be more careful with your choice of words.

She will forgive you. I know that.  

 

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