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작성자 : mad*** · 2015-09-17
[Topic : Something that like and dislike about my school]
Firstly, I like my school's P.E equipments and hygiene.
Because, I think that the most important part to make student study effciently is cleaness. So, school should make sure that the school is clean and use good equipment. And that's exactly my school is.
But, I dislike my school's educational system.
Because, school usually does not inform the change of school system.
And when some kind of system started, it isn't maintaining longer.
These are the something that I like and dislike about my school!
Firstly, I like my school's P.E equipments and hygiene.
Because, I think that the most important part to make student study effciently is cleaness. So, school should make sure that the school is clean and use good equipment. And that's exactly my school is.
But, I dislike my school's educational system.
Because, school usually does not inform the change of school system.
And when some kind of system started, it isn't maintaining longer.
These are the something that I like and dislike about my school!
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[Topic : Something that like and dislike about my school]
Firstly, I like my school's P.E equipment and hygiene because, I think that the most important part to make student study efficiently is cleanliness. So, school should make sure that the school is clean and use good equipment and that's exactly my school is doing.
But, I dislike my school's educational system because our school usually does not inform the change of school system.
In addition, when some kind of system started, it wouldn't last long.
These are the things that I like and dislike about my school!
Firstly, I like my school's P.E equipment and hygiene because, I think that the most important part to make student study efficiently is cleanliness. So, school should make sure that the school is clean and use good equipment and that's exactly my school is doing.
But, I dislike my school's educational system because our school usually does not inform the change of school system.
In addition, when some kind of system started, it wouldn't last long.
These are the things that I like and dislike about my school!