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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-09-15

Watching TV can give you lots of knowledge. But, if you watch for long time without time limit, it can damage your health. While you are watching TV, you might want to eat some snack or instant food like pizza. Then, you will eat them without realizing how much you ate till the funny TV program finishes and you starts to get out of the brainwashing of TV but, unfortunately, the snacks and other foods are already having travel in your stomach. It’s not easy to throw up! Your body will start to pick up the fats and other bad substances from them and store in your body! How awful it will be! It’s late when you regret. You might decide not to, but you will repeat it again later, your body acting it naturally. So, enough TV-watching doesn’t matter, but, watching without having conscious can be dangerous!

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Watching TV can give you lots of knowledge. But, if you watch for a long time without time limit, it can damage your health. While you are watching TV, you might want to eat some snack or instant food like pizza. Then, you will eat them without realizing how much you have eaten till the funny TV program finishes and you start to get out of the brainwashing of TV but, unfortunately, the snacks and other food are already travelling in your stomach. It's not easy to throw up! Your body will start to pick up the fats and other bad substances from them and store in your body! How awful it will be! It's late when you regret. You might decide not to, but you will repeat it again later, your body acting it naturally. So, enough TV-watching doesn't matter, but, watching without being conscious can be dangerous!
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