CORRECTION/S:
I have a My dream car that is a shiny beautiful and black car. and!!!! Because Beautiful cars always make me happy. My dream car also has to look good. But, I think I can't afford my dream car will be because it is too expensive so I will have to be rich. If that happens, I will buy many of my dream cars!!!!
Note: Adding words to your sentences would clearly express your ideas.
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