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My dream car!!!!!!

작성자 : pse***   ·   2015-09-12

I have a deam car that is shiny and black, and beautiful!!!! Because beautiful car make me always happy. It also looks good.But I thnk my dream car will be expensive so I will be rich and I will buy many of my dream cars!!!!!

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I have a My dream car that is a shiny beautiful and black car. and!!!! Because Beautiful cars always make me happy. My dream car also has to look good. But, I think I can't afford my dream car will be because it is too expensive so I will have to be rich. If that happens, I will buy many of my dream cars!!!!


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