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작성자 : wlE*** · 2015-09-13
Let me tell you about a family member I have spent the most time with.
I have two sons. One is 11 years old, the other is 9 years old. they are elemantary school student both. They are very active and imaginative also have a so many sense of humour.
but after school, they usally go to Academy, they don't have sufficient time to play. so always want to play in the playground near the my house. and like to play a board game, build a Lego and solve the puzzle problems.
When I come home after a work, I usally spent time with my two sons.
first, I always play the soccer game in the playground with them, If we can not play outside because of raining or low temperature, I usally play board game with them. they don’t want lose the game so I lose the game on purpose from time to time.
When I finish the my work, frankly I am very tired so want take a rest, but I want be a good and thoughtful father and give a good memory to sons. so I always make an effort to play with them.
I have two sons. One is 11 years old, the other is 9 years old. they are elemantary school student both. They are very active and imaginative also have a so many sense of humour.
but after school, they usally go to Academy, they don't have sufficient time to play. so always want to play in the playground near the my house. and like to play a board game, build a Lego and solve the puzzle problems.
When I come home after a work, I usally spent time with my two sons.
first, I always play the soccer game in the playground with them, If we can not play outside because of raining or low temperature, I usally play board game with them. they don’t want lose the game so I lose the game on purpose from time to time.
When I finish the my work, frankly I am very tired so want take a rest, but I want be a good and thoughtful father and give a good memory to sons. so I always make an effort to play with them.
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Let me tell you about our family member whom I have spent the most time with.
I have two sons. One is 11 years old, the other is 9 years old. They are both elementaryschool students. They are very active and imaginative and also have a great sense of humor.
But after school, they usually go to their academy. They don't have sufficient time to play. They always want to play in the playground near our house. They also like to play a board games, building things with Lego and solvethe puzzle problems.
When I come home aftera work, I usually spend time with my two sons.
First, I always playthe soccer game in the playground with them. If we can not play outside because it's raining or the temperature is low, I usually play board games with them.
They don't want to lose the game so I let myself lose the game on purpose sometimes.
When I finishthe my work, frankly, I am very tired so want take a rest, but I want be a good and thoughtful father and give a good memory to my sons, so I always make an effort to play with them.
I have two sons. One is 11 years old, the other is 9 years old. They are both elementary
But after school, they usually go to their academy. They don't have sufficient time to play. They always want to play in the playground near our house. They also like to play a board games, building things with Lego and solve
When I come home after
First, I always play
They don't want to lose the game so I let myself lose the game on purpose sometimes.
When I finish