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작성자 : epr*** · 2015-09-11
1. I usually play with my friends.
2. I spend at academy many time.
3. I take care of my brother however he is smirky to me.
4. I am happy when I am with my mom.
2. I spend at academy many time.
3. I take care of my brother however he is smirky to me.
4. I am happy when I am with my mom.
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CORRECTION/S:
2. I often go to the academy.
3. I take care of my brother however he is (?) to me.
4. I am happy when I am with my mom.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Choice of words
* Sentence construction