Thank you for doing your homework, Ann!

It is time over playing the games.
>>The time is over for playing games.

The princess room is so big.
>>The princess's room is so big.

If we draw a line we always have to use a ruler.
>>If we draw a line, we always have to use a ruler.

Today I saw verry pretty girl in the street.
>>Today, I saw a very pretty girl at the street.

My gran's house is so far form my house.
>>My grandma's house is far from my house.

Needs to improve:

~choices of words
~possessive nouns
~punctuation
~spelling

Good job!!!