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작성자 : car*** · 2015-09-08
My best friend is very like to smile.
My best friend always with me go to shoppping.
My best friend can play basketball ,and sometime she play basketball with me.
My best friend not only speak chinese and english,but also can speak korean .
My best friend very like play bungee,I like too,so we often to play.
My best friend always with me go to shoppping.
My best friend can play basketball ,and sometime she play basketball with me.
My best friend not only speak chinese and english,but also can speak korean .
My best friend very like play bungee,I like too,so we often to play.
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My bestfriend really likes to smile.
My bestfriend is always with me going shopping.
My bestfriend can play basketball and sometimes we played together.
My bestfriend can speak Chinese, English and Korean.
My bestfriend and I like to do bungee jumping together.
Points to improve on:
*Sentence Construction
*Subject verb Agreement
*Spelling
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