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작성자 : pse***   ·   2015-09-08

Hello.I wll talk about my friend 지원!!
I met her at 5-1classroom.She was very cute,clever,kind and postive.
I like 지원 because,when I was sad she encouraged me,andwhen i was tired she helped me.Most of all she always smiles!!!i like people who smile!!!So I want to be friend with 지원 forever~~~~
Thank you!!!!^o^ ^#^ ^*^ ^~^

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CORRECTION/S:

Hello! I will talk about my friend ??¿ø.
I met her at 5-1 classroom. She was very cute, clever, kind, and postive.
I like ??¿ø because when I was am sad she encouraged encourages me, and when I was am tired, she helped helps me. Most of all, she always smiles. I like people who smile. So, I want to be friend with ??¿ø forever.

Thank you!!!!^o^ ^#^ ^*^ ^~^

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