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작성자 : sou*** · 2015-09-03
Policeofficer turn on a siren
My friend dance front of me and I laugh
I ate icecream. I was so cool
My friend dance front of me and I laugh
I ate icecream. I was so cool
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The police officer turn on the siren.
My friend danced in front of me and I laughed.
I ate ice cream. I was felt so cool cold after eating.
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