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작성자 : ryu***   ·   2015-09-03

There're four seasons in Korea.
Spring, summer, fall, winter.
We can do so many things in each season.
I can see beautiful flowers in spring.
Couples go to see cherry blossom. It is so beautiful that many people want to go to see them. I like it very much, too.
Next, in summer, we go to the beach or swimming pools like Caribbean Bay.
Also we eat a lot of icecreams and cold drinks.
But I REALLY hate mosquitoes. I can't sleep because of them..
Fall, my favorite season! As I talked, we can see red and yellow leaves and I can be a fashionable person:) The weather is so nice, too.
Last, in winter, we can go to ski. I don't like ski, though.
I love knitwears!! And I can wear them in winter.
Winter is coming, so I'm looking forward to it.

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There're four seasons in Korea.
Spring, summer, fall, and winter.
We can do so many things in each season.
I can see beautiful flowers in spring.
Couples go to see cherry blossom. It is so beautiful that many people want to go to see them. I like it very much, too.
Next, In summer, we go to the beach or swimming pools like Caribbean Bay.
And also, we eat a lot of ice creams and cold drinks.
But I REALLY hate mosquitoes. I can't sleep because of them..
Fall, is my favorite season! As I have talked, we can see red and yellow leaves and I can be a fashionable person:) The weather is so nice, too.
Last, In winter, we can go to ski. I don't like skiing, though.
I love knit wears!! And I can wear them in winter.
Winter is coming, so I'm looking forward to it.

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