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작성자 : a96***   ·   2015-09-02

immortal Almost every person want to be immortal.


verify:I've verifyed if this sentence is corret.


increase:My homework is increasing because my grade gets higher.

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immortal Almost every person want to be immortal.
> Almost every person wants to be an immortal.

verify:I've verifyed if this sentence is corret.
> I've verified that this sentence is correct.

increase:My homework is increasing because my grade gets higher.
> correct!


Wow! That was good, Edwin! Thank you for doing your homework. Please take note of the following corrections.


Love,
Teacher Joyce




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